Passive
and Active Voices
are also said to be
either active (The executive committee approved the new policy)
or passive (The new policy was approved by the executive
committee) in voice. In the active voice, the subject and verb
relationship is straightforward: the subject is a be-er or a do-er and the verb
moves the sentence along. In the passive voice, the subject of the
sentence is neither a do-er or a be-er, but is acted upon by some other agent
or by something unnamed (The new policy was approved). Computerized grammar
checkers can pick out a passive voice construction from miles away and ask you
to revise it to a more active construction. There is nothing inherently wrong
with the passive voice, but if you can say the same thing in the active mode,
do so (see exceptions below). Your text will have more pizzazz as a result,
since passive verb constructions tend to lie about in their pajamas and avoid
actual work.
We find an overabundance of the passive voice in sentences
created by self-protective business interests, magniloquent educators, and
bombastic military writers (who must get weary of this accusation), who use the
passive voice to avoid responsibility for actions taken. Thus "Cigarette
ads were designed to appeal especially to children" places the
burden on the ads — as opposed to "We designed the cigarette ads to
appeal especially to children," in which "we" accepts
responsibility. At a White House press briefing we might hear that "The
President was advised that certain members of Congress were being audited"
rather than "The Head of the Internal Revenue service advised the
President that her agency was auditing certain members of Congress"
because the passive construction avoids responsibility for advising and for
auditing. One further caution about the passive voice: we should not mix active
and passive constructions in the same sentence: "The executive committee approved
the new policy, and the calendar for next year's meetings was revised"
should be recast as "The executive committee approved the new
policy and revised the calendar for next year's meeting."
Take the quiz (below) as an exercise in
recognizing and changing passive verbs.
The passive voice does exist for a
reason, however, and its presence is not always to be despised. The passive is
particularly useful (even recommended) in two situations:
- When it is more important to draw
our attention to the person or thing acted upon: The unidentified victim was
apparently struck during the early morning hours.
- When the actor in the situation is
not important: The aurora
borealis can be observed in the early morning hours.
The
passive voice is especially helpful (and even regarded as mandatory) in
scientific or technical writing or lab reports, where the actor is not really
important but the process or principle being described is of ultimate
importance. Instead of writing "I poured 20 cc of acid into the
beaker," we would write "Twenty cc of acid is/was poured into
the beaker." The passive
voice is also useful when describing,
say, a mechanical process in which the details of process are much more
important than anyone's taking responsibility for the action: "The first
coat of primer paint is applied immediately after the acid rinse."
We use the passive voice to good effect
in a paragraph in which we wish to shift emphasis from what was the object
in a first sentence to what becomes the subject in subsequent sentences.
The executive committee approved an entirely new policy for
dealing with academic suspension and withdrawal. The policy had been written
by a subcommittee on student behavior. If students withdraw from course work
before suspension can take effect, the policy states, a mark of "IW"
. . . .
The paragraph is clearly about this new
policy so it is appropriate that policy move from being the object in
the first sentence to being the subject of the second sentence. The passive
voice allows for this transition.†
Passive
Verb Formation
The passive forms of a verb are created
by combining a form of the "to be verb" with the past participle of
the main verb. Other helping verbs are also sometimes present: "The
measure could have been killed in committee." The passive can be
used, also, in various tenses. Let's take a look at the passive forms of
"design."
Tense
|
Subject
|
Auxiliary
|
Past
Participle |
|
Singular
|
Plural
|
|||
Present
|
The car/cars
|
is
|
are
|
designed.
|
Present perfect
|
The car/cars
|
has been
|
have been
|
designed.
|
Past
|
The car/cars
|
was
|
were
|
designed.
|
Past perfect
|
The car/cars
|
had been
|
had been
|
designed.
|
Future
|
The car/cars
|
will be
|
will be
|
designed.
|
Future perfect
|
The car/cars
|
will have been
|
will have been
|
designed.
|
Present progressive
|
The car/cars
|
is being
|
are being
|
designed.
|
Past progressive
|
The car/cars
|
was being
|
were being
|
designed.
|
A sentence cast in the passive voice
will not always include an agent
of the action. For instance if a gorilla crushes a tin can, we could say
"The tin can was crushed by the gorilla." But a
perfectly good sentence would leave out
the gorilla: "The tin can was crushed." Also, when an active
sentence with an indirect object is recast in the passive, the indirect object
can take on the role of subject in the passive sentence:
Active
|
Professor Villa gave Jorge an
A.
|
Passive
|
An A was given to Jorge by
Professor Villa.
|
Passive
|
Jorge was given an A.
|
Only transitive verbs (those that take
objects) can be transformed into passive constructions. Furthermore, active
sentences containing certain verbs cannot be transformed into passive
structures. To have is the most important of these verbs. We can say
"He has a new car," but we cannot say "A new car is had by
him." We can say "Josefina lacked finesse," but we cannot say
"Finesse was lacked." Here is a brief list of such verbs*:
resemble
|
look like
|
equal
|
agree with
|
mean
|
contain
|
hold
|
comprise
|
lack
|
suit
|
fit
|
become
|
Verbals or verb forms can also take on
features of the passive voice. An infinitive phrase in the passive voice,
for instance, can perform various functions within a sentence (just like the
active forms of the infinitive).
- Subject: To be elected by
my peers is a great honor.
- Object: That child really likes to
be read to by her mother.
- Modifier: Grasso was the first
woman to be elected governor in her own right.
The same is true of passive gerunds.
- Subject: Being elected by
my peers was a great thrill.
- Object: I really don't like being
lectured to by my boss.
- Object of preposition: I am so
tired of being lectured to by my boss.
With passive participles, part
of the passive construction is often omitted, the result being a simple
modifying participial phrase.
- [
Having been] designed for off-road performance, the Pathseeker does not always behave well on paved highways
Sumber : http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/passive.htm
Nama : Siti Diah Ayu Pratiwi
Kelas : 4 EA 15
Universitas Gunadarma
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